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Reviewer: sgv0918 | Date: Mar 17, 2010 03:14 PM
I like the storyline.....and the sex.
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Reviewer: shnuggleshnee | Date: Jan 18, 2010 08:09 PM
Can't believe this story is over.....I miss it already.....plus you gave me confident sacrastic sex as hell elliot....can't blame Olivia for being addicted to that! LOL!
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Reviewer: conc3p | Date: Jan 17, 2010 10:00 PM
I fucking loved this. Especially this last chapter. It was really strong. I read this line several times:
So they will go home together now, like riding a high, and chase it with sex.
Awesome.
And those last few lines about how 11 years were a smokescreen and onward? Vivid, and really made this chapter. And he tastes like whiskey. Good lord.
So they will go home together now, like riding a high, and chase it with sex.
Awesome.
And those last few lines about how 11 years were a smokescreen and onward? Vivid, and really made this chapter. And he tastes like whiskey. Good lord.
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Reviewer: manda | Date: Jan 17, 2010 06:18 PM
I really enjoyed this! Very hot last chapter =)
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Reviewer: hibbleton | Date: Jan 17, 2010 10:53 AM
holy crap, so much love. the revisiting of her fantasy, the smoke refrain through the whole thing, the case weaved into the character-POV, it's all stellar.
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Reviewer: MissMandi | Date: Jan 17, 2010 03:39 AM
You're right, the writers would never go there. But I'm glad someone did, and I'm glad that someone was you. This story deserved to be told, and I'm happy I got to read it. Wonderful!
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Reviewer: ckdexterhaven | Date: Jan 17, 2010 01:35 AM
{{{Because if it's not one addiction, it's another. And Elliot will always be her greatest vice.}}}
I seriously COULD NOT have put it any better myself!!! That was the perfect ending!!!! **hugs you**
I seriously COULD NOT have put it any better myself!!! That was the perfect ending!!!! **hugs you**
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Reviewer: joaninha | Date: Jan 17, 2010 01:15 AM
holyshit balls this is beyond hot. it's past the boiling point really. they're so twisted it's downright delicious
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Reviewer: surreallis | Date: Jan 17, 2010 12:32 AM
*happy sigh* Excellent, bb. You always give such good angst. Your Olivia is one I relish. I can dive into your fic and happily drown.
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Reviewer: AmyJ | Date: Jan 16, 2010 11:46 PM
Amazing!! When I'm not on my phone I'll review properly but you my love, are amazing! X
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